PGSM Senshi Star

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Visual - 5/10 - The layout is clean, but it's not very PGSM-ish. This is an obvious template layout, and some additional personalized touches are in order. The background image on some of the pages is too busy.

I'm also confused by the navigation menu, things seem out of order, and there are some site sections that would be better off on another site, namely "Stacey" and "Fluto".

Text and Info - 6/10 - There isn't much text on the site, which is disappointing. A little more info is definitely in order.

The site would also benefit from an editor or beta reader, because there are many avoidable spelling and grammar issue that detract from the fanfiction.

I'm also not fond of the "Ayaka" section which is written in the first person. This makes it seem like an impersonation website, which Freewebs is not fond of.

Interactive - 3/10 - There are very few interactive opportunities on the site. There are some poorly arranged image galleries to look at and some YouTubed videos, but nothing really new.

Originality - 5/10 - There's nothing really different about this site.

Return Factor - 3/10 - The site is quite small and can be viewed all in one visit. The lack of media also gives visitors little reason to return.

Overall - 22/50 - Not a bad start for a site, but there is some definite need for improvement.